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। INTRO। Committing Sins can drive your soul to Hell... ।Plot। An Oppressive King who tortured his subjects, Day after day until a battle took everything from him. All Of A Sudden his world shattered as he witnessed Death closely after getting executed. Judgment fell on him, throwing him to the bottom of hell. Pain and Scream all ended up in veins as there is no place for death in hell. After everything and everybody when he submitted himself to hell, A miracle occured. An order from absolute fell. Giving him a second chance in Second Life. Where he touched his past self and saved the character of himself by the help of his own and a girl, his wife. A tragic story with immense powers and Energy started to write an answer. Who Is Responsible For His Sins If Almighty Loves Everyone?Tragic truths come forward.Making A hilarious journey to find the peace which could satisfy one for eternity. OWN PEACE IS UNACHIEVABLE [Writer- You have witness better but not this]
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Chapter 1 - Hell's Arrival

"Give me back my daughter!" a woman desperately screamed from the crowd.

"You devil!" another voice came."Where is my family?" another cried. Then another shouted, "Return our happy days! you demon!"

Chaos erupted among the crowd as the monster set his foot and began to walk through the middle lane between crowd of people.

His hands were cuffed. A deep scar across his chest, still dripping blood. Two guards were walking behind him, ready to kill if he intended to flee.

Yet, That monster looked like a human. He was wearing a golden armour bejeweled with diamonds.

Ignoring the screams and cries of the crowd, he was walking toward the stage. Where a rope was craving to snap his neck.

As he stepped on the first staircass. A man screamed at him, "Your brother was an angel! You killed him, Monster!"

Hearing the shout, he stopped his movements. He moved his gaze to the direction from where that man shouted.

Meeting with his gaze, the man tripped in fear. Shivering from that death stare.

Thud!

One of the guards shoved him with a stick, ordering to move forward.

He reached the top of stage. A guard stepped forward and slipped the noose around his neck. He stared at the crowed.

As he glanced, people hid their children behind them. One glance from his eyes could steal a child's sleep until death.

A priest started talking "Now, all of us will wish for his right judgment to the All Mighty. We.. wis.. he will give.. him another..." His voice started trembling "Forgive me God! I can't wish for the rebirth of this devil!"

His voice ignited the chaos again. People started breaking barriers to reach the stage, to kill this devil by their hands.

He started speaking. "I, Zinor Agatsu curse all of you with more painful death after me. I will find your angel in the hell's fire and I swear to kill him for eternity again. All of you will serve me again in the hell when I conquer it. Ha! Ha! Hahaha!!"

As he burst into laughter, crowd raged and rushed to the stage breaking barrier only to ascertain his death.

Clank!

With a pull to the lever, the chaos stunned. That devil got hung. The executioner freed this world from that devil.

Zinor's body became frozen while hanging by the neck. His struggle was instant. His mind didn't catch up with the suffering before his neck broke.

'What happened?' Zinor was thinking in his mind. He tried to move his body but failed. 'What the heck is happening?' he exclaimed in his mind.

The whole world slowly became black and white before him.

Everything stopped.

Then a figure showed up. He was floating in the midair above Zinor's sight.

Zinor looked up to see.

"Are you?!" his soul screamed with a glance of that figure.

The figure was very terrifying. Beyond imagination.

That figure waved a Scythe, in his hand out of air. The Scythe was darker than darkness.

He waved backwards in the air. Then he ordered Zinor, "You! Corrupt soul. Come out from the precious body made by the creator! Death is ordering you to come out at once."

Zinor was struggling to catch up to his words. He didn't understand why his mind was trembling; he is fearing, his body was shaking, he just wants to escape from his gasp.

Then, a strike, made by his Scythe, cut Zinor's body into half.

He grabbed Zinor's soul by it's throat."Your judgment is waiting !" saying this he vanished with his soul.

Everything then becomes normal. That day, people of Agarwan witnessed that devils can die too.

The judgment hall fell silent as Death throw a soul, on the floor. It was Zinor. The hall was filled with peoples yet they weren't humans.

Zinor looked at his surroundings. 'What the heck are these peoples?' he questioned in his mind.

The figure with Scythe left the hall as soon the judgment started.

A voice start talking, " Zinor Agatsu. At Age 10, first killed a servent. Age 11, killed own mother... Age 12, killed 10 peoples who scored high in swordsmanship than him,... "

Zinor found a human like person who had wings on his back, face was hidden by cloak, was reading this from a huge book.

He exclaimed at him, "What is the meaning of this?".

Thwop!

"Ahhh!!!" he cried. when a hunter whipped him on his back. Leaving a mark of strike. A person who looked like an gaurd, stroke him from back.

He ordered "Evil, should stay silent."

"Age 30, killed wife Desdimona, by choking. Age 31, killed older brother, Zinthor..."

Hearing the last name everybody around the judgment was shocked. Zinor watched their eyes widen upon hearing his brother's name.

Then the person who sat on the judge's chair stated. "Though you have done so much sins I am giving you a chance to plead so we will think about giving a little lighter punishment to you for eternity."

Zinor said, "Like I care! Who the hell are you! Now that Scyth guy is gone, I don't fear you creeps."

The judge stared at him for a while.

Then the whole hall burst into laughter. The executioner guy hiding his eyes laughed and said "A sinful mortal got a big mouth? Ha! How about sealing that with nails of hell?"

"A mortal! Hahaha!" one from the crowd laughed. "A hellish insect? Haha!" another one joined the laughter.

Zinor frowned "Did I said a joke?"

Judge stopped laughing. "Sorry for the causeless act. Let's hear his moral deeds."

That reader turned pages untill the book ends. "Age 5, he gave water to his father." he said.Then closing the book, he asked for judgment.

Zinor was ignoring everything like it's just a part of an awful act.

The Judge announced "Here's your judgement, Zinor Agatsu. you will be punished for eternity in the 12th Hell "

Suddenly hands appear from ground and started pulling Zinor down with them.

Zinor exclaimed, "What kind of joke is this! I will cut this dawm frea—"

He got pulled down by hands.

A huge sound erupts through the stages of hell. As a new arrival is screaming while crushing hell's stages and falling deeper into it.

With a slam he fell on the surface. At last.

"Where I am? " he asked.

He heared some sound. Not too loud.

He moved his sight in it's direction, only to freeze himself. Creepy insects were crawling to him. There faces were humanoid though blood reeks out of their eyes and nose. Most terrifying was their mouth; it was like beetles.

They crawled all over Zinor. Biting him. Tearing his flesh. Though he died, he felt pain, more than he felt when he was alive.

"Stop. Stop. Ah! Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!" a scream of pain, echoed through the 12th Hell. Then started fading, fading with the insufferable pain. Only leaving bones of him as a mark

of—

Now You Are In Hell.

To Be Continued....

(For some reasons, next chapter will come on 2nd May)