"So, you intentionally added a swallowing action. Was it to establish the character's logic?"
"Nope. Instead, it looked like blatant acting."
"Additionally, from the overall character design perspective, a part-time worker wouldn't wait until the morning market's closing time to buy cheap buns. It would delay their start time at work."
"You might as well portray a nightclub hostess just clocking out, scrimping and saving to pay for a family member's medical bills. That would give the character more depth and make the skit far more dramatic."
"What the heck!"
Yang Chaoyue gaped, her eyes wide open in disbelief, dumbfounded.
"Mr. Su, what on earth did you do before? How do you even know drama theory?"
Su Huai bit back a laugh, casually waving her off. "Why worry about what I did? Just focus on whether the critique makes sense or not."
"It does! It does! You've enlightened me!"
